Tuesday, March 4, 2008

बेटियाँ...

बेटियाँ को क्यूँ ऐसा बनाया विधाता तूने,
जहाँ जाती है दुनिया रंगीन बनाती है,
बचपन मे बाबुल के आँगन की रौनक,
जवानी मे साजन के घर की इबारत,
और बुढ़ापे मे बच्चों के जीवन का आधार.
इतना सहनशील क्यूँ बनाया बेटियाँ को विधाता तूने,
सहती है सारी बंदिशे- परिवार की रंजिशे;
उमीद की जाती है सारा बोझ उठाने की,
फुर्सत नही दी जाती है उन्हे उफ़ तक करने की,
इस पर भी मॅन नही भरा विधाता तेरा,
जो बनाया बेटियाँ को बेटियो का दुश्मन तूने???

7 comments:

Janani said...

im a person who cannot read hindi fluently. but this poem is so simple that i was able to read and understand..

Janani

Unknown said...

This is beautiful poem that describes the life of a lady...and I would say that institutions like society, family and Marriage exist because of this patience/ tolerance nature of women.

tanujbhushan said...

You will make a damn good poet for sure. But let me highlight the fact that the poem shows the darker side of the society and I believe that there is a always a positive side to the coin and I would like you to highlight the positive side in the next poem.

I do not want to feel gloomy the next time I read your poem. Use your talent to create happiness and bring smiles to peoples' face.

But the talent is great. Hats off to you.

Cheers!!!

डाॅ रामजी गिरि said...

"सहती है सारी बंदिशे- परिवार की रंजिशे;
उमीद की जाती है सारा बोझ उठाने की,"
हमारे तथाकथित सभ्य समाज के दोहरे मानदंड को रेखांकित करती है आपकी रचना...

डॉ .अनुराग said...

sachhi bat....

Unknown said...

Ohhh i never knew that my daughter is such a nice poet and so creative. keep the good work.. And GD bless u.

Papa

karmowala said...

that is a fabulous poet or thought keep it up and make a good thought for all the people